English/Czech - Re-Entry/Návrat

This week's English/Czech posting is the 4th poem inspired by the abstract art of Ivan Pavlíček. I would love your comments on either version of this poem.

Re-Entry

© Ivan Pavlíček

Blue turns to

Violet

As absence

Slowly fades

And my heart

Begins to

Burst into

Flaming red

© Alice Vedral Rivera – 9/26/12 7:45am CST

Návrat

Modrá se mění
do fialova
Když nepřítomnost
pomalu vadne
A moje srdce
začíná planout
žhavou červenou

© Alice Vedral Rivera  - 2012