After showing the draft of the cover on a glossy white background, the feedback I received was that it needed some color and possibly some marbling. So, I am working on it. Really stretching my limited capabilities here.
Sharing this work in progress:
ramblings of a passionate woman
(poetry, commentary, spoken word, songs, photos)
Dare to view... Dare to comment... Dare to follow...
Showing posts with label retrospective. Show all posts
Showing posts with label retrospective. Show all posts
Tuesday, December 3, 2013
Monday, December 2, 2013
Progress Update - T. Collection
The T. Collection is getting close to being ready for publication. The formatting was a challenge, but not as bad as I thought it would be. I just need to do one more thing and add the info to the interior of the book. I have designed a book cover that I am happy with and finally decided to only put lyrics inspired by T. on the back cover. My cousin,Ciba, wrote the music and recorded a demo version of it. I will share it when the book actually comes out.
The cover background color should be white - I don't know why it scanned in as a grayed beige. The paper it is on is white with dark purple lettering. Things that make you go hmmmmm.....
Sharing the book cover - what do you think? I am trying to keep it simple.
The cover background color should be white - I don't know why it scanned in as a grayed beige. The paper it is on is white with dark purple lettering. Things that make you go hmmmmm.....
Tuesday, November 19, 2013
Project Priority - The T. Collection
I have decided to make the 'T. Collection - A Retrospective' project a priority above the 'Shadows on the Carpet' at this time. I have been sitting on the 15 poems in this series for a long time looking for someone to illustrate it for next to zero money as I have been on a shoestring budget and my efforts to raise money via Fund Anything for 'Shadows' fell flat.
I am tapping into my own creativity and creating 'photo art' to go with the poems because I have specific images in mind to go with most of the poems. My writers' group authors are using Create Space (Amazon) to self publish their novels and have encouraged me to use that resource as well. I don't know how well it will work for poetry, but they do mention poetry in their publishing info and images as well.
I am tapping into my own creativity and creating 'photo art' to go with the poems because I have specific images in mind to go with most of the poems. My writers' group authors are using Create Space (Amazon) to self publish their novels and have encouraged me to use that resource as well. I don't know how well it will work for poetry, but they do mention poetry in their publishing info and images as well.
Soooo.......... let me share 'Marigolds' with you now. There is an audio version of it as well for those that are interested - link provided - click here
MARIGOLDS
![]() |
photo art by AVR |
When I see marigolds
I remember the time
We strolled down the alley
Hand in hand
Stopping to kiss
You stooped down
Picked some marigolds
Gave them to me
A sign of your love
And then I get
A flashback
Of the pain
On your face
As I walked
Out of your life
Not knowing then
It would be forever
Labels:
AVR. Alice Vedral Rivera,
book,
Chuck F. Berglund,
electronica,
flashback,
kiss,
love,
marigolds,
music,
pain,
photo art,
poem,
poetry,
retrospective,
sorrow,
The T. Collection
Sunday, September 1, 2013
Puppy Love - The Camp Series
Puppy Love is one of 2 new poems I wrote today to add to my camp
series of poems and I have 3 more in the works. I had previously written 15
poems (6 in 2006 and 9 in 2010) that are part of The Camp Series. I have
written these poems in the third person - the adult me looking back at me, the
child.
The Camp Series was written about my experiences at Camp Hostýn in
1961 & 1962. Camp Hostýn was about
50 miles outside of Montreal – the closest town was St. Calixte du Nord. It was founded in 1954 by Father Bohuslav
Janicek, a Czech Jesuit, for children of Czech and Slovak descent. I almost didn’t get to go to camp in 1961 as
I tried to swing on a clothesline and cracked my collarbone a few weeks before
we (my younger brother and I) took Greyhound buses from Chicago to Montreal.
The very first ‘publication’ of my poetry was in the official camp ‘pamphlet’ in 1962 (I was 11 and the poems were in Czech). Both of the poems was republished in the 1979 25th anniversary issue.
Puppy
Love
One of the
Older girls
![]() |
photo art by AVR |
Would take her
When she went
To meet with
Her boyfriend
And he would
Take Peter
And so these
Ten year olds
Chaperoned
The two teens
On their walks
On the path
Through the woods
Laughing and
Talking and
Holding hands
Peter let
Her wear his
Cap for that
Whole summer
And made her
Believe that
He liked her
Her first crush
First love at
Camp Hostyn
Summer of
Sixty-one
©
Alice Vedral Rivera – 9/1/2013 6:15pm
Subscribe to:
Posts (Atom)