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Showing posts with label social commentary. Show all posts
Showing posts with label social commentary. Show all posts
Monday, March 23, 2015
Thursday, December 4, 2014
Children of Tomorrow
Sharing one of my social commentary poems from Shadows on the Carpet I
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Photo AVR © 2014 |
CHILDREN OF TOMORROW
From you - our future
From you - we borrow
You are the children
Of all our sorrow
Children of tomorrow
In the aftermath of today
What will you do?
What will you say?
Children of tomorrow
Ours in every way
What are your horrors?
What price will you pay?
Children of tomorrow
Living with our legacy
Can you survive?
Can you stay free?
From you - our future
From you - we borrow
You are the children
Of all our sorrow
© Alice Vedral Rivera
– 6/16/06
Saturday, September 27, 2014
Alive in Wonderland
I realized, the other day, that I had written 19 Poemhunter inspired poems and then I wrote 2 more. I will be re-posting those poems to PH one at a time and I will endeavor to add my own audio to some - so far the audio doesn't seem to be taking.
FYI, I am grateful for the Poemhunter website. It was the PH forum that taught me not to
take criticism so personally and helped me overcome my fear of sharing my
poetic ‘babies’. The poets I have met
and continue to meet on this site have left indelible marks on my writing by their
example, encouragement, critiques, comments and forum discourses. I have to credit the PH forum for inspiring
me to write a good many of my social/political commentary poems. This poem is part of "Shadows on the Carpet I", '
Visions' section (inspired by the PH forum).
Visions' section (inspired by the PH forum).
ALIVE IN WONDERLAND
Going down the rabbit hole
Ravages one’s eternal soul
Blowing it up nine feet tall
Living in Wonderland
Not having the upper hand
A life with integrity
It’s not so easy
Listening to the queen of hearts
Scream about some stolen tarts
More tea parties to be had
Thinking that you’re going mad
Being the underdog
Listening to a pedagogue
Say: “Live with integrity”
It’s not so easy
Floating through the looking glass
See distortion as you pass
A pathetic figurine
Wants to be a real queen
Alive in Wonderland
Where life is never bland
Living with integrity
Is not so easy
© Alice Vedral Rivera
- 2006
Sunday, August 31, 2014
Shadows on the Carpet III Available on Amazon
I have been very busy this past month and a half and did not have time to post the fact that Shadows on the Carpet III was available for purchase on Amazon. So here is the link - better late than never.
Shadows on the Carpet III on Amazon
Shadows on the Carpet III on Amazon
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...from desolation to restoration... |
Monday, June 30, 2014
Shadows on the Carpet II Available on Amazon!!!
"Shadows on the Carpet II" is now available for purchase on Amazon!!! I am so excited. Join the journey and navigate through the darkness - these poems are mostly relationship commentary poems with some social/political undertones.
Available on Amazon
Available on Amazon
Wednesday, June 25, 2014
Shadows on the Carpet III
Now that Shadows II is done and should be available on Amazon as soon as I receive and ok the proof, I am working on the 3rd and last book of the trilogy - hitting rock bottom and the climb up. Tell me what you think of the cover.
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book cover by AVR |
Friday, May 9, 2014
Featured Reader - Tamale Hut Cafe Reading Series
I will be May's Featured Reader at the Tamale Hut Cafe Reading Series! I will be reading from Shadows on the Carpet I, The T. Collection - A Retrospective and one selection from Dearest and Most Precious: A Love Journal. I will have books available for purchase at a special price of $10 + some additional perks if you buy more than one of my books. This way I will have something for those who like my dark poems and something for those who like my love and sensual poems/poetic prose.
Check out the THC Reading Series Blog
Check out the THC Reading Series Blog
Saturday, March 22, 2014
Shadows on the Carpet I
With all the company from the Czech Republic coming and going, I have not had much time to work on getting the book ready for publication. But I am making some slow progress.
Sharing the revised front cover for the 1st book of the Shadows on the Carpet Trilogy. I have finished making the manuscript adjustments and am now being challenged getting the book cover to look the way I want it to.
Sharing the revised front cover for the 1st book of the Shadows on the Carpet Trilogy. I have finished making the manuscript adjustments and am now being challenged getting the book cover to look the way I want it to.
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Tuesday, March 4, 2014
Airport Ordeal - A Bit of a Rant
I am just getting over a major
fibromyalgia flare up from all the stress last Friday. The pain from the flare up kept waking me up and I was in pain
even in my dreams. The flare up included the need to stay close
to the bathroom for one and a half days in part because my schedule of taking probiotics, supplements
and meals at specific times was thrown way off on Friday's stressful day at the
airport. I had left the house around 2:15pm and with 4 hrs. at the airport,
hitting mega traffic on the way home and needing to make a quick stop to see
someone at a location close to the airport I didn't make it home til almost
9pm.
Airport Ordeal

Welcome to the
United States of America 2014!
Saturday, January 18, 2014
Working hard on "Shadows on the Carpet Part I"
After getting through the holidays and then the snow and more snow and deep freeze, I have been busy working on preparing "Shadows on the Carpet I" for publication. I decided to split Shadows on the Carpet into 3 books (each book with 3 sections and containing about 35 poems). Part I - Shadows, Visions and Luna-cy is almost ready. Formatting is still the biggest challenge for me. I finally have a revised front book cover for part 1. Neither software nor hardware were cooperative and every thing took me longer than I expected due in part to some 'operator error' and program incompatibility. I still need to come up with something for the back cover and finish formatting the manuscript to fit the template and be aesthetically pleasing to my eye.
This 1st part will contain the most direct and overt social/political commentary poems with some relationship under tones - a descent into the abyss so to speak. The 2nd part will be falling deeper into the pit and part 3 will be hitting rock bottom and the climb back up and out. Two and three will contain more overt relationship poems with social/political undertones.
Sharing the revised front cover with you today. Comments welcome!
This 1st part will contain the most direct and overt social/political commentary poems with some relationship under tones - a descent into the abyss so to speak. The 2nd part will be falling deeper into the pit and part 3 will be hitting rock bottom and the climb back up and out. Two and three will contain more overt relationship poems with social/political undertones.
Sharing the revised front cover with you today. Comments welcome!
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